Изменения по замечаниям руководства?
1.There are 4 chapters in your work. Which of them do you consider to be theoretical and which is practical - your own work, results?
2.From the text of your thesis you should delete the words CHAPTER ONE, CHAPTER TWO. Put the number (Roman numbers) and the title of the chapter only. Each chapter starts from the new page.
3.What about the first chapter - content analysis, who has done that? There are no references in the text. What you should do and it's urgent is to add all the references into the text.
4.Ok, then it should be not Chapter 1, you should change the order.
First, the theoretical part should be presented in the thesis. Is it now chapters 2 and 3? And what about chapter 4, strategy - yours?
5.Then you should put chapter 3 - as chapter 1, chapter 2 should be the same, chapter 1 should be put as chapter 3 and the strategy - chapter 4, but - in your final strategy chapter you should describe what your strategy is based on, what methods of research helped you to develop that strategy - it's not stated.