Корректировка дипломной работы

Работа писалась год назад на русском языке и переводилась на англ. Нужно проверить на ошибки, выполнить требования куратора, добавить ссылки - вообщем доработать до состояния сдачи работы.
Требования куратора:
1. The work looks like it is written according to the topic and provides interesting information about many internet practices related with the hotel services market.
2. The thing that bothers me at the most is the fact that there is no one citation IN THE TEXT which is a main requirment according to the APA harvard style. Please note if you do not citate every author with the year of publication in the text everywhere you used the publication the work will be considered plagiarized and it will not receive positive mark. This is also valid for the tables and figures you use in the text and which are not your own. The work is being checked with very sophisticated software and please be careful how you use the citations as well.
3. The literature review looks like providing many facts - please do your best to provide more analysis based on the facts and try to relate good Internet practices with the perspective marketing strategies.
4. I also think it will be good if in the literature review you may relate the topic of your study with the product specifics - i.e. the fact that the product is service and the consequences of this
5. Please also be careful to show the necessary number of academic sources used as not all of the sources are considered academic.
В связи с тем что диплом был изначально сделан на русском а после переведен на английский ссылки на цитаты возможно сложно найти, поэтому обращаемся к вам за помощью.
Работу скину исполнителю.