Английский

Прикрепила образец, он неправильный, но та же тема, надо заново написать. Проверка на антиплагиат есть.

вот их комментарии к этому образцу:

In this second version, however, we expect impeccable citation work and referencing. If you have trouble with this, please refer to online guides on careful documentation work such as: https://purdueglobalwriting.center/basic-documentation-guidelines-2/?amp. We also strongly suggest, you do not think of your paper as a collection of “facts” other people have written. We do want to see that you have thought about “medical tourism” in your own way and are connecting the “facts” in a way that drives your personal argument. If we remember correctly, you were inspired to write about this topic given experiences you have had or heard about in your/your family’s country of origin. We would encourage you to use this connection or the country’s situation as a jumping-off point. We are certain this, or a related “in” to the topic, might help you “stay on the right path.”